Tuesday, November 25, 2014

National Novel Writing Month of 2014

      Hello again! So it's been awhile since I've posted on my old blog, but I'm back again and with no idea what I'm going to talk about.
     My novel for the National Novel Writing Month is coming along well. I did not wake up in a writing mood today, though. I had to force myself to sit down and write. I reached today's word goal! I have written 41,717 words in Darkest Before Dawn
    I downloaded Evernote and am trying to use it as a way to organize my book notes. So far it's working out pretty well. I can sync all my notes from my computer to my tablet so I can have it on the go too. I have moved all my Celestial Trilogy notes to it already. I wanted to put it on my iPod too because I use it more often, but apparently my iPod is too out of date for the app. As far as I know it won't allow me to download an older version of the app. :/  Oh well! Now I have another reason to use my tablet more often. :D 
   Also, pretty random but... I want to see Big Hero 6 soooo bad!!! That and The Maze Runner. The trailers for Big Hero 6 are funny and adorable and I can't believe I haven't gone to see it yet! 
   Okay, I'm done. XD 
  Thanks for reading! God bless you!

Thursday, August 7, 2014

August 7, 2014

     For whatever reason I am still having the hardest time deleting my blog. As you've noticed I've had some fun redecorating. I saw some other blogs that use Blogger and the way they designed their blog put me in a designing mood. I'm probably going to do the same thing on Weebly.
     I wanted to do some cool, really long post on this blog, but can't think of anything to say. Well, I've had about twenty-one people read the first chapter of my book Darkest Before Dawn on Wattpad.com. I found out that I could share it on Google+ so once I did that I got more readers. That was exciting. So far I have written 15,841 words in that book. I was a little under 5,000 words short of my word goal for Camp NaNoWriMo.
    The title of this post has no real significance as the others may have. I like giving my blog posts and books cool titles, but the more I post the faster I run out of names. Maybe later I'll think of something and edit my post.
     Anyway, that's all I have for today. God Bless! Have a fantastic day!

JuniorNovelist4Chirst

Wattpad LizzieRise

Monday, June 23, 2014

For The One Who Comes Back

For the person who goes back and checks anyway, just because there's that small chance that maybe something new appeared. Hello! I am that person and I could not resist posting on my old blog just in case you are that person too. I wish I had something cool to share with you, but I don't. *leaves for a couple hours, distracted by other open tabs*
Okay, so I now I do have something to share. XD
http://www.wattpad.com/user/LizzieRise
I'm going to give wattpad a try. Given that my book is only a rough draft I'm kind of unsure about putting it out there, but I have made an account on the site and once I start learning my way around things will get better.
And that's all. Bye! God bless!

Monday, May 26, 2014

Goodbye

Goodbye Blogger.com. Hello Weebly.com! Just making sure that everyone is up to speed on the move to Weebly. Since I have so few followers I don't want to lose anyone. So far I'm not regretting my move to Weebly, but it is a little sad to leave Blogger because this is where I started. I still have so much to learn on Weebly.
Anyway, here's the link again. http://juniornovelist4christ.weebly.com/

Friday, May 23, 2014

We're Moving!

Okay everyone, the time has come. I have my computer back so I've created my account on Weebly.com. The website should still be called juniornovelist4christ and name of the blog is still named Junior Novelist. I will have shared some of the posts that I may have already shared here, but I'll soon be working on a new post. I'm currently proof reading the beginning of the first chapter of Darkest Before Dawn which I hope to share with you soon. I'm still learning how to use Weebly so you may start to see changes to the website over time.
Here is the link to my new blog Junior Novelist

Tuesday, May 20, 2014

Book One of the Celestial Trilogy

I had just seen the newest Batman trilogy when I was creating my book Darkest Before Dawn. One of the characters in the movie said, "The night is always darkest just before the dawn." or something like that. Those words got stuck in my head so when thinking of what to name my new book, that came to mind. Hence, the title Darkest Before Dawn. Of course, I have to tie that into my book somehow. That was actually pretty easy because of the storyline. Plus, I wanted the book to be the beginning of a trilogy and the title also worked for that. I quickly decided to name the second book Light of Dawn, but I didn't know what I would call the third book. 
I finished Darkest Before Dawn and had even begun Light of Dawn last year. When I began to exam Darkest Before Dawn more closely I discovered that I had introduced too many characters. I was trying to focus on too many characters in one book. Seeing that I needed to fix that I went back to where I'd begun to stray away from the original plot and deleted everything else. That erased  over half of my book. I decided that I would redo everything in the book from that point on. It was a task that I didn't care to do and so I decided to take short break from writing which resulted in a year long break. 
I began writing other things, but this was the beginning of a long dry spell in writing for me. Every book I began to write, failed. During November I gave a half hearted attempt at writing 50,000 words in a month for NaNoWriMo, but I only got 6,000 words. The book I tried was called Invisible. Needless to say I did not attempt to continue writing in that book. I tried writing with Ginny in her book Classified, but that went down hill. That's when I tried Blue Jay and then Remember Ariel, improving my writing a little as I went. I was trying to reach 45,000 words in a month during Camp Nano when I found myself preferring to edit the book rather than write it. That's when I realized it might be time for me to pick up Darker Before Dawn again. 

During that year I had tried to edit Darkest Before Dawn a few times and got bored with it every time. This time I began by rewriting it from the very first chapter. I'm following the same basic storyline as before, but it's a little different. 
I considered only writing Darkest Before Dawn and then moving on to something else, but decided against that. It's now the first book of the Celestial Trilogy. 

The main character in Darkest Before Dawn is Hannah Dawn Scot, but she goes by Dawn. Her name has no connection to the title, that was purely a coincidence.

I wrote a short, incomplete, and kind of lame synopsis that doesn't really tell you much about the book, but it was fun to write so I'll share it anyway. Synopsis:
 Adam Smith, a man with a difficult past who endeavors to face it again. Dawn Scot, a brave girl who dares to venture into the unknown.The two virtual strangers will go on a life altering journey and only at the end will one's deepest secret be revealed. But will it's revolution cost another their life?

Monday, May 19, 2014

Updates and News

Okay, so now that I've published my last post I can see that the link did not work, but I don't know how to fix that. 

I was finally able to get on a computer today and look at the stats for my blog. (I've been using my iPod) My blogger app doesn't allow me to see the stats. The stats show me how many people have viewed my posts. I was so happy to see that as many as 16 people read one of my post on May 11th. Since no one had commented when I asked them to I was beginning to think no one was reading my blog. Not that I would blame them, I wouldn't read my blog if I were someone else. Now that I know somebody's following me then I will try a little harder to keep up my blog. 

Also, Ginny is creating a blog. She's using Weebly.com and I've been looking over her shoulder as she's making her blog. Weebly looks so cool! It has far more options than Blogger. I would like to start using Weebly instead. That said, once I have my computer back then I plan to create my blog on Weebly. When I'm done then I will share the website with you. I hope I don't lose any of my readers during the move. I'll probably post about it a few times to be sure everyone is aware that I'm moving. I will stick to blogger for a little while longer though, it will take awhile before I can get my computer back. (I should probably say "our" computer because it's Mom and Dad's and I just use it a lot.) The computer is at the repair shop, that's why I can't use it right now.

Ending today's post with a quote I found on a friend's blog. 
"Failure doesn't come from falling down. Failure comes from not getting up." ~ Anonymous

Sunday, May 18, 2014

Celestial Trilogy

     Darkest Before Dawn, Light of Dawn, and Night Serene are the three books that will make up the Celestial Trilogy. It's possible I might change their names later on, but that is doubtful. I wanted to call it the Starlight Trilogy, but that was used by several other people. (There's still a 95% chance that I'll call it the Starlight Trilogy anyway.)

     There are two other possibilities for what I could rename the trilogy. I would probably only rename it if my readers wanted me too. My niece and little sister are reading this trilogy, by the way. The books could be called, Coming Darkness, Darkest Before Dawn, and Light of Dawn in that order. Then I would call it the Red Sky Trilogy. The second possibility is Coming Darkness, Haunting Night, and Dawn's Light which would be called the Starlight Trilogy. But like I said, I would only rename it if my readers wanted me to and I agreed with them.

     The Celestial Trilogy is set in a make believe world that's basically a re-imagined earth. Other than farmers most of the people live in the cities. Some cities are more advanced in technology than others. Where one city may have cars, televisions, and phones another might not have any of that and the people might even wear clothes similar to that of the medieval times. 

     I do not have a synopsis for any of these books yet, but I do plan to write one for Darkest Before Dawn soon. My next posts will most likely be focused on Darkest Before Dawn for a while. I will try to edit the first chapter so that I might be able to share some of it with you. If you like Pinterest then you can go to my board called "Novel Inspiration" and get a better idea what the cities and characters look like in Darkest Before Dawn. Here's the link if you're interested ->  http://www.pinterest.com/lizziegirl03/  You may have to copy and paste it if the link doesn't work.

Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Remember Ariel

I know I said I wouldn't talk about my books, but I'm quickly running out of ideas. I just tried a post about my siblings, but that got really boring. I want to elaborate on Remember Ariel some more because it's easier for me to talk about my books. 
Originally I wanted to name it The Code or something more computer-ish and technological sounding, then I found out there was a book and a movie by that name. The sentence remember Ariel is supposed to be used in two ways in the book. "Don't you remember, Ariel?" is one way it might be used. Ariel lost her memory so that's a question she would be faced with occasionally. "Remember Ariel?" is another question, one I already used in the book. In the book a mysterious little girl asks a woman if she remembers Ariel. 
When I title a book I like to use the title at least once somewhere in the book. I want it to mean something. In this book when the mysterious little girl asks that question it means everything. It's very important. That's also the part of the book where I got my writers block. I have no idea where I was going with it or why the girl is asking that. I just know it's important.
How Remember Ariel came to be. For months I kept coming up with a few ideas for some books I could write. I wanted to do something with technology, I wanted to give some of my characters an ability or "talent" that we don't have in the real world, I wanted them to wear dresses like in fairy tales and the medieval era. I wanted them to use swords and bow and arrows, but I wanted there to be cities, an oppressed people, a sad love story, a happy love story, and I wanted the main character to lose her memory. Instead of writing separate stories I combined them all into one.  Ariel lives on a small farm like many others in the country. She knows little about modern technology, she wears medieval dresses like everyone else she knows, and she's engaged to the man she loves. The people in her land are suppressed and have to pay high taxes. She's taken away by the government that dwells within tall walls and she discovers a modern city within the  towering walls. There she's used in an experiment, a computer chip of some kind is implanted near her brain that gives her the ability to control computer stuff and do other cool things like that. But, the operation erases her memory of everything in her life before that, she doesn't even remember her name. Because she doesn't know she's engaged she'll fall in love with someone else. So there you have it. All my book ideas crammed into one book. 
There's just a couple problems, pretty big problems, actually. A partial or none existent plot and a mysteries girl asking an important question, but I don't know why it's important. I wrote myself into a deep, deep pit and I can't get out. 
Frustrated and tired of trying to think it through I left the book and decided to pick up Darkest Before Dawn. As I mentioned before I hope to pick up Remember Ariel again someday.    

Monday, May 12, 2014

The End or the Beginning?

No matter what I try I can't seem to keep up my blog. I forgot about it yet again. When I did remember my blog I didn't know what to blog about. My only hobby is writing, but I'm quickly running out of things to say about it. Plus, I'm at a really dry spell with my writing, I've had three books in a row crash and burn, mostly because two of them didn't have a main plot. I've picked up an old book of mine that I had started one or two years ago, but I don't want to bore you with the details of that book. I asked some friends for advice on what to blog about, but I only got suggestions to talk about my favorite outfit, cooking, and sewing. I don't sew enough to blog about it. What on earth would I say about cooking? "So, I'm like, cooking dinner again.... I'm making macaroni and cheese.... It's my favorite food." That's so boring! My favorite outfit... I have no idea how to describe it. I could only take a picture and show you, but how dull is that? 
Clearly I have a dilemma. I really want to keep this blog, I love doing it, but with nothing to say what's the point? So, I've made a plan. I have made a list of things that I might be able to blog about. There are six categories with varies topics under each one. I'm going to try to test some of them out and see what works. 
Also, if there is anyone who's reading this blog and you actually like it then please let me know. I want to know if I should bother continue this blog or not.
P.S. I probably won't continue with quotes or verses in my posts. Both Blue Jay and Remember Ariel will probably never be completed. If I pick up Blue Jay a whole lot of it will be changed that you most likely won't recognize it. I would like to finish Remember Ariel some day, but it would receive a lot of revision too. 

P.S.S. I am currently rewriting and editing Darkest Before Dawn which I hope will become part of a series. 

Wednesday, April 23, 2014

Resplendentruth

I'm following the blog Resplendentruth and when I read her post "See the Beauty" I wanted to share it with others. I already posted this, but was then reminded by my mother that I should have asked her if I could share her post on my blog. So I deleted it, emailed her and now that I have her permission I'm sharing the post again. I thought I should explain that for those of you who read the post, then saw it vanished and reappear.
Look around you. Maybe there’s a window nearby. Look out of it. What do you see? Do you see the vast sky, or at least a small section of it? Do you see trees?
Beauty lies everywhere. This world, and even the things outside it are amazing. A simple flower, petals so perfectly shaped, the color crisp and bright. Beautiful.
The sky, so brilliantly blue, full of bright streams of sunshine. Trees reach their waving branches up into the air providing a wonderful, vivid contrast of color.
Petrichor. A wonderful word to describe the wonderful smell of the earth after rain. Fresh. Beautiful.
The feeling of warm sun touching your skin in an invisible embrace. The sun touches the earth, providing warmth and light, and yet, if it were any closer, we would burn up. If it were any farther away, we would freeze. The perfect distance for life.
Even beyond the earth and the wonderful things on it, planets hang in the emptiness, each striking in size and color. At this point, we are barely a speck on the surface of a vast and beautiful planet. But, head further out to see even greater wonders, thousands of light years away, a distance I can’t even fathom – the distance light travels in a year. We see galaxies and trillions of stars, all shining brightly in perfect beauty.
Galaxy M106, 25 million light years away.

The M106 Galaxy
Go a little further out, 28 million light years, and you will find The Sombrero Galaxy. It is 50,000 light years across.

The Sombrero Galaxy
20 million light years away is the Whirlpool Galaxy or the M51 Galaxy. The Nucleus of this galaxy holds something amazing.

The Center of the Whirlpool Galaxy
According to the Hubble site, “the galaxy is spectacular because it is tilted nearly face-on to Earth, allowing for an unobstructed view of its the bright core.”
Stunning. A perfect picture of God’s love and power.
Yet, even with all this beauty and great feats of workmanship around us, we get caught up in the things of life. We are weighted down and simply forget to look at the wonders around us.
It’s so easy to take for granted the world around us, and to walk around without a constant sense of wonder.
I would challenge you to take a few minutes to look. Simply look. See the wonder. See the beauty. Look for God’s fingerprints on His creation. And above all, realize how great your creator is. Realize that if He made this world, and even the things outside of it thousands of light years away, he can take care of you. He is bigger than anything that you can even imagine. And He loves you.
Don’t take it for granted. Look for the beauty in everything.

Friday, April 11, 2014

Christ Is Risen

     "And he saith unto them, Follow me, and I will make you fishers of men. And they straight away left their nets, and followed him." Matthew 4:19-20
     "Jesus said unto him, Thou shalt love the Lord thy God with all thy heart, and with all thy soul, and with all thy mind. This is the first and greatest commandment." Matthew 22:37-38
     "Go ye therefore, and teach all nations, baptizing them in the name of the Father, and of the Son, and of the Holy Ghost: Teaching them to observe all things whatsoever I have commanded you: and, lo, I am with you always, even unto the end of the world. Amen." Matthew 28:19-20
     This is the command of our Father. If we love Him with all our heart, soul, and mind then we will obey his command and go to all the nations declaring the wondrous news to all that will hear. "It is finished." (John 19:30b)"Christ is risen just as He said! We are forgiven of our sins, we are one with Him again!" And we will sing praises to our God because we're overflowing with the joy of the Lord, "Christ is risen from the dead, trampling over death by death. Come awake, come awake, come and rise up from the grave! Christ has risen from the dead! We are one with Him again!"
     That's the short, but important message I have that took me about an hour to put together. For my quote or Bible verse I will do Psalm 8:1 "O Lord, our Lord, how majestic is your name in all the earth! You have set your glory above the heavens."
     The above verses from Matthew came from the KJV. Psalm 8:1 was probably from NIV, but I'm not sure. The song Christ Is Risen is from Words and Music by Matt Maher and Mia Fieldes, Arranged by Gary Rhodes from the book The Instant Worship Choir Collection Volume 2.

Thursday, April 3, 2014

Frustrations

     I can not believe this! It's both funny and frustrating at the same time. In my post "Updates and Apologies" I apologized for the many grammar and spelling mistakes I made in my last posts. I think I made more mistakes in that post than all the others combined! I forgot to use the spell check, I spelled "apologies" wrong! Apologies! How silly is that? Every time I looked at my post (after I published it and two people already read it) I found at least one mistake. Okay, I feel better now that I've gotten that out of my system.
    So, I'm following a few other Christian teens blogs and one of them does a quote of the week post which I thought was cool. I think I might do that. :) I'll either do a quote, or Scripture, or both. We'll start with this one, Genesis 1:1 "In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth." NIV
   And that's all. God bless you! :D

Updates and Apologies

     Oh my goodness, have I really been gone for a whole month?! I knew it had been awhile since I made my last post, but I didn't realize it had been a month. I do apologize for my long absence. I didn't do much on the Internet during March, nor did I do much writing. Now April is here and with it Camp Nano so I'm back online. I've chosen Remember Ariel for my Camp Nano book with a goal of achieving 45,000 words by the end of the month. So far I'm doing good, I'm writing an average of 1,500 words a day which puts me ahead of schedule. I hope I'm not boring you with all my talk about my novels, but I have absolutely no idea of what else to talk about. Remember Ariel is doing pretty well, better than I expected actually. The main plot is still a little fuzzy... okay, a lot fuzzy, but so far that hasn't been a problem.
     Also, I'm sorry for how badly written my last post and possibly all the others are. I just type these posts out in about... *thinking* oh,  I don't know, thirty minutes(?) maybe. I only read over it once so I miss a lot of errors. I only knew that my last post had a good deal of grammar and spelling mistakes because I let my mom read it and she pointed a few out to me after I had already posted it. Although, I doubt this post will be any better.
     *Sigh* I am really struggling with what to talk about. I don't want to bore my readers, but I don't want to abandon my blog either. The only things I can't think to talk about are Remember Ariel and the British show Doctor Who. My best friend introduced me to the show and I love it! I get really excited every time I find out someone else likes Doctor Who too..... That's all I can think of to say today... and I forgot how I said good bye in my other posts. Oh well, I'll say something different. :) God bless you! :D

Saturday, March 8, 2014

National Novel Writing Month

     I am a part of National Novel Writing Month, otherwise known as nanowrimo. Nanowrimo also has what they call camp nanowrimo. The national novel writing month is November when you write a 50,000 word novel and submit it, if you can reach 50,000 words. Camp nanowrimo is basically the same things, except it's the month of April. I'm thinking for camp nanowrimo I will write a book called Remember Ariel, but a part of me thinks I should just stick with Blue Jay.
     Last year I tried to write a book called Invisible for national novel writing month, but I only reached 6,000 some words. I had invented the characters and the bad guy, but I hadn't thought out the plot and therefore it didn't get very far. Although, I have not learned my lesson. I know about the characters of Blue Jay, but very little about the plot, or anything at all about the plot. The same with Remember Ariel. Remember Ariel is a book idea I've come up with by combining all my ideas for different books into one. I think it could be really good if I devoted my time to it.
     So, I'm going to share my little synopsis of Remember Ariel in hope of some feedback. I would like your opinion on whether or not I should pursue writing Remember Ariel while I'm still writing Blue Jay. Now, I have written two novels at one time before, but then, those are novels I've never finished. Blue Jay is really slow going because I need to know the plot, but I don't. I fear Blue Jay is dying a slow death and I'd rather not have that happen. I already have at least three people that I know of reading it, I don't want to leave them in a cliff hanger forever.
     Any suggestions on plot ideas, which book to write, what I might rename Blue Jay?  (I'm looking to rename Blue Jay, I can't remember if I told you that or not) Just anything that might be helpful at this point.
     Here is the synopsis for Remember Ariel: Ariel and her father are taken from their home and brought into the capital city. In the City Ariel is separated from her father and due to a government experiment she loses her memory. A small group of teenagers in a situation similar to her own enlist her help to uncover their corrupt government's secrets.    There's more to the book than that, but I'm terrible at writing a synopsis that really tells the reader what my book is about.
     Thanks for reading my ramblings, I know I started rambling at some point up there. :)

Wednesday, March 5, 2014

Blue Jay's beginning

I've offically started writing Blue Jay. I have only previewed the Prologue one or two times that I'm giong to share with you below so I'm sure you'll find a ton of mistakes that will embarrass me the next time I read it after I make this post. But, here it is... ->
                                                                     Prologue
                                                                       ~ Ashley ~
      “You go around back, I’ll take the front.” FBI Agent Samantha Rubin instructed me.
      I complied and went to the back of the house, my gun in hand. We went through the front and back doors at the same time, I could hear her moving throughout the house.
      “FBI!” She shouted, for when you stormed a house like this we had to announce who we were.
      “USI!” I shouted after Samantha did. We were from two different agencies, working together.
So far it seemed as though the house was empty, but when I was coming down the narrow hallway to meet Samantha in the middle of the house I heard what sounded like a struggle. I ran down the hallway, my gun held out as I was trained to do when storming a house with a suspect in it that was assumed to be armed and dangerous.When I entered the room of the struggle I saw Samantha laying on the floor, her eyes closed and her gun missing, but no sign of the attacker. I moved cautiously as I went to Samantha and checked for a pulse. She seemed fine, just unconscious.
Just as I was standing up the sharp point of a needle pierced my skin, with much force my assailant stuck the needle in my neck injecting the contents into my blood. I grabbed his arm, trying to fight him, but it was to avail. The contents of needle weakened me and it felt as though I were passing out as I slowly fell to the floor. My vision was incredibly blurred, my eyes mostly closed and every noise sounded muffled like I was underwater.
Through the haze of my vision I saw the man take away my gun and hand it to another blurry figure. I struggled to stay awake, but it was to no avail.


                                                                ~ Yuri ~
       At the sound of the click Storm opened the door slowly and we entered the old, dirty apartment. We searched the apartment, but didn’t find it’s occupants so we repeated our search only more carefully this time. We were looking for something, anything that would tell us what the criminals that we were chasing were up to, what their next plan was. I was searching the bedroom that looked mostly unused when Storm called from the kitchen.
      “Hey, come check this out.” He called and I joined him in the kitchen.
      “What is that?” I asked, gesturing to the three jars of clearish liquid that he was looking at.
      He turned one of the jars around, reading the label that looked like someone scribbled something on it with a foreign language. “Oh no…” He mumbled under his breath and by the sound of his voice I knew it wasn’t good.
      “What? What’s it say?” I asked, my stomach starting to knot in apprehension.
      “It’s not what it says that matters… It’s the handwriting.” He said, looking back at me. “They’re working with Cara.”
      “They’re… She….” I stuttered, fear beginning to take it’s hold on me. Not Cara. Of all the people they had to call upon her for help. The woman specialized in poison and was the most… insane criminal you could ever meet. In my opinion, anyway. I’d only met her once, but that was enough to scare me for a lifetime. “Then what is… that?” I asked, pointed to the jars filled with the strange liquid.
      “I’m pretty sure it’s a poison of some kind. Cara’s known to put them in jars like this. So don’t touch the jars, don’t touch anything. For all we know this whole place is poisoned.”
      “What about the air?” I asked, getting paranoid, but the way I saw it I had every right to be paranoid. Cara was known to poison anything she felt like at the moment. People were afraid to get near for fear she would poison them one way or another.
“Um…” Storm thought about this a moment. “You have a point there, but we can’t get too precocious or else we won’t be able to do anything or go anywhere. Making everyone so scared of her is part of what she tries to do, so technically that would be letting her win. Just, look on the bright side, at least fifty percent of her poisons have an antidote.” Only fifty percent!
“So what do we do now?” I asked, trying to keep my voice calm and neutral.
“We take these with us. I know someone who might be able to give us a better idea of what it is.” He answered. He took a large plastic bag and a pair of gloves from his army, green backpack, putting on the gloves. He put the jars in the plastic bag which he in turn put in his backpack. He took off the gloves, stuffing them in his backpack too. “Did you find anything else in the house?”
“No, it looks mostly uninhabited.” I answered, pushing my fears of Cara out of my mind for
the time being.
“Alright then, let’s go.” Storm said, but only made it as far as the door before his phone rang in his pocket. He stopped, struggling momentarily to get the cell phone out of his deep pocket. “Hello.” He answered the call.
I thumbed my fingers on the wall impatiently. It’s a cell phone, you can walk and talk, you know. I thought, but didn’t voice it.
“Yes.” He said after listening a moment. He went back to the kitchen and I followed him. “Yep, I’m doing it right now.” He dropped his backpack on the floor and put the jars of unknown liquid back on the counter.
“What are you doing?” I asked in whisper because I didn’t want to interrupt the phone call, but I wanted to know why he was putting it back.
“Yes,” He said again. “I hear you. I did it, happy now? Well that’s too bad.” He paused, listened, and then went back to the door as he did so.
I hesitated then followed him out of the apartment building.
“Okay, how about this. I leave you alone and you leave me alone?” Storm suggested to whoever he was talking to. “Fine! But if something happens then you can only blame yourself.” He hung up, still walking to the car he put the phone back in his pant’s pocket.
“Who was that?”
We got in the car and he started the engine. “That was Cara.” He said, ticked.
      “What?! How does she have your number? How did she know what we were doing?”
      “Come on, Yuri, this is Cara we’re talking about. She can do anything she puts her mind to. I wouldn’t be surprised if she was tracking my phone.” He paused, taking his phone back out of his pocket. “Oh great, she’s tracking my phone.” He muttered, rolling down the window he then tossed the iPhone four out of the window. That was a nice phone. “I wanted an upgrade anyway.”
      “Couldn’t you have just turned it off, or taken out the battery? Not throw it out a window.”
      “No. Technology is advancing, some computer geeks can do some scary stuff these days.” Storm said, driving out of the parking lot.
      “So, Cara called you and told you to put her stuff back?” I asked, “And you listened?
      “Yep, pretty much. She said she has eyes and ears near here, close enough to kill us if I didn’t comply to return her stuff. And, knowing her she does have at least one hired gun nearby.”
      “How did she know that we took in the first place and that we returned it?”
      “That’s a good question. My guess is that she had someone hack into my phone and used the camera to hear and possibly see what we’re doing. That or she has someone watching us.” He said, then seemed to more fully realize what he just said. “Great. Someone could be following us. Give me your phone.”
      I gave it to him and he threw it out of the window too. “That’s littering, you know.” I pointed out. It was a good thing that wasn’t my personal phone, just the one I took on missions like this.
      “Is it?” He asked somewhat sarcastically. “My bad.”
      “Where are you going?” I asked, noticing that he took a turn in the opposite direction I thought he would go.
      “To your apartment, I’m just taking a different rout. A more remote rout with more turns. This way it will be easier to tell if someone’s following me. After that I’m contacting the Blue Jays. If Cara’s involved then this whole thing is much bigger than we anticipated.”


       Once at my apartment Storm contacted one of the Blue Jays via some kind of internet thing. (I know very little about the internet, or just computers in general.) After waiting awhile we finally got a response.
       “Go to Raven Island, and be at A.J.’s Bar by three in the afternoon tomorrow. There you will meet either Uriah or Dusty.”
      “Dusty’s nice, hopefully it will be her. She’s more informative and laid back.” Storm said, closing his computer. “Well, if we want to get there in time we need to leave now.”
                                                                       ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
And there you go. I hope you enjoying. :)

Monday, February 10, 2014

Blue Jay

Hopefully this will better explain what Blue Jay is about because the synopsis I posted doesn’t say very much. I still don’t have too much information on it though because this is still a new idea and I’m still working on the plot.

Blue Jay is about a young girl of twenty named Ashley Phillips who was raised all her life in an orphanage. She was told that a woman dropped her off at the doorstep of an orphanage with a note that said her parents were dead. A foster parent named her, but only kept her for two years. At eighteen she applied in law enforcement and a friend recommend her to the UIS, Universal Investigative Services. For two years she trained for a deep, undercover mission and now she’s finally been assigned to one.

Ashley’s sent to Raven Island, a place only the evil and completely corrupt know about. The FBI and UIS only know about it because FBI agent Samantha Rubin has a history with some of the evil and completely corrupt people that go to Raven Island and she told her boss about it. Ashley’s mission on the island is to root out the center of all organized crime.

Now before I go any farther let me explain a few things to you. First of all, it’s based on an imaginary world, or more like it’s earth, with some modifications. I also don’t know much about federal agencies and since I’m writing this book for my enjoyment I don’t care to spend hours researching stuff. So I’m just making up the way they do things. I have already created most of the characters many months if not years ago and some of them Virginia has created. Because it’s an imaginary version of earth you could read references to time and space travel. This means you might read about a character that’s an alien, but I’m going to try to keep a little more realistic than that.

The second main character in the book is Yuri Katz. He’s part of group that calls themselves the Blue Jays. It’s a small group of young people that are trying to fight the evil forces of the dwellers of Raven Island and protect the innocent. (That sentence was too wordy, but I can't think of any other way to say that.) I don’t know much about this character yet except that he’s getting close to finding out who’s behind it all. When I say “behind it all” I mean, who found Raven Island? How come no one except big time criminals can find the island? Because it’s not on google map. All the other questions escaped my memory just now. That train of thought completely derailed and there were no survivors.

Anyway, that’s what I’ve got so far. I was going to say a lot more, but I forgot all of it. I wrote half of this post one day, got distracted and came back and now I’m finishing it today.

Saturday, February 8, 2014

A Novel Idea

     I have come up with an idea for another book. I think I'm going to call this one Blue Jay, I'll probably explain why later. I've come up with a synopsis for the book, but it's a lame synopsis because I don't know enough about the plot and I'm just not good at writing a synopsis. But here it is:
     "Ashley Phillips had grown up in the orphanage all her life. At eighteen she was hired by a federal angency for a deep, undercover mission to root out the center of all organized crime. As she embarks on a deadly mission that has killed all of her predecessors she begins to uncover secrets that would be better left alone.
     Yuri Katz is devoted to find the one person who pulls all the strings of the criminal underworld.  He's made a name for himself in Raven Island and is just starting to pull back the veil when a girl who goes by Hope Albright comes into his life and ruins all of his plans."
    This book is based off characters that I created when I was younger. I hope it works out. :)

Friday, February 7, 2014

Introduction

     So, I'm a junior novelist who has failed to complete a single novel. I did write one that I call Darkest Before Dawn, but when I reread it I didn't like the second half of the book and deleted that part. So now I'm only half way through with that one, but haven't touched it since last summer. I'm the girl who starts to write a novel, and never even gets half way. Although, Virginia and I have been writing a book together called Icy Silence, we both love where the story is going and we've almost finished it. Almost. Soon we will have to edit it, and do all that stuff that I find so boring. 
     We hope that Icy Silence will be part of a trilogy called Frozen Secrets. The books will probably never be published or read by anyone other than ourselves, for we only write for fun. Hidden Secrets is another book we're working on at the same time as we write Icy Silence. It was inspired by Icy Silence. The main characters are related to, or know some of the characters in Icy Silence and at some point the main characters of both books will meet.
     It took me a few days after I created this blog to figure out what I was going to say. I don't know very much about blogs.  If anyone could give me suggestions of Christian novelist's blogs for me to read, that would be great. I'd like to read some Christian novelist's blogs so I have a better idea of what to talk about in my own blog.